ANC Summarizer 12-1-06
A summary is Mary Lou has to write in a journal during the summer for language arts. During dinner Mary Lou’s father brings up the subject that their cousin Carl Ray. Carl Ray was coming down because he needed a job. Then when the kids were cleaning Mary Lou and Dennis was bring down the extra mattress Dennis fell down the stairs.
December 2nd, 2006 at 10:24 am
You chose the important parts to write about, but I would have liked to have seen explanations about why you think they are important. Things to think about for your next post are that you could have a stronger thesis statement and conclusion. There are some sentences that are not complete.
December 4th, 2006 at 2:43 pm
You have a very good sumery it is true what you said but in your last sentence that was not a very important partof what happened a more important part would have been when Carl Ray arrived.
December 4th, 2006 at 2:46 pm
I like the way you summarized the passage. You had an ample of explanations and details of the setting and plot. Although you had a few speling and grammar errors, the post is spectacular!